Beginning of the end... 6th part ~*~Awarded~*~
At the edge of all endswith flames burning brightlyrising Venus climbs Heaven's domeblazing words of my Tranquil Realmfrom her red lips streams in rainbow's hues,pearls of happy daysstrung...
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IllumAbsolutely stunning images in this very creative poem, excellent presentation in white and grey. So many beautiful phrases, among them, this:Quote:oh dear Friend sing, sing the talesof my...
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Quote:pearls of happy daysstrung togetherwith threads of Meant to Givewashing ashoreby tides of merciful memorieswith Love they came,now blown away by Sorrow's windsHi illu, You've captured the so...
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((((~Alfred~)))))Each breath of this wraps around the heart in the most delicate of sorrow's whispers....you've captured a place in life's journey that all of us can understand and relate to....a...
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Quote:in the beating graveyard of dreams and hopesthat is s brilliant line. It reaches to the depths. As does the entire poem, Alfred. Please stop by Poems For The Heart and Soul, have a look around,...
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illuminatix Completely left speechlessWOW!!!HugsLynn The most beautiful experience we can have is the mysterious. It is the fundamental emotion that stands at the cradle of true art and true science"...
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Of course the whole poem is a Beautiful Masterpiece Alfred, going to depths of heart that only a Poet dares to go... But I am going to stay away from the graveyard this time and quote what I feel is...
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Thank you dear Ellen for your kind words! they mean so much to me ~hugs~
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Dear Rick, thank you for stopping by at my verse. I am glad you Enjoyed the read!
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Hmm Dearest Dawn, did I tell you much I missed your words? Your reply as always left me in emanating hues of blushThank you sweet friend ~~~~~~~big hugs~~~~~~~
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Dear Jan, thank you ~~~~~~~~~hugs~~~~~~~~~
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Alfred,Your words consume the soul...moments found in hushed reflection and pause.Greatly enjoyed,Robert JosephFree Verse, Southern
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Thank you dear Lynn for reading this spill. I am glad that you have enjoyed your stay ~hugs~
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This one called me back........and it's always a pleasure to fall into the delicate whispers of your verses.......each and every time...**hugs**~dawnie~Follow me to Poetic Constellations...bleed my...
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Well I hope this is the last piece for this saga ~sigh~ I was going to post this a long time ago but work toke me away from poetry ~deep sigh~ but I thought I will post this now. I am more than...
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Dear Robert I am glad you felt this eruption of sorrow Thank you for reading it
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Oh Dearest Dawn, if it would be up to me I would never let you drift away from my pages ~big hug~ thank you Sweet Lady of Stars forShining on me
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**~Alfred~**Reading this on 9/11, it truly fits the entire memorial of the day.Wonderfully done... congrats on your award.
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Absolutely stunning, Alfred. So deeply emotional, so beautiful, yet sad. It brought tears.
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If it had to end, I would prefer this be my eulogy. Congratulations.
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~deep sigh~ This series contains some very touchy poems for me, reading this one tonight and the replies leaves me with "hunted" feelings... Thanks Queen and Blue
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